Wednesday, January 25, 2012

White Swan Comments

Rating: 3.5

White swan, fine and fair,
tell me secrets deep.
White swan, holding the sun,
show the love you keep.
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Jacob Thompson
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Genny Thomas 25 January 2012

I really like your White Swan poem, reading it I could feel the peace and tranquillity of the writing and the words. It's a beautiful poem - like a real white swan. :)

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