Winter Night In My Room Poem by prapti choudhary

Winter Night In My Room

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SEEMS MINUTE HAND HAS PETRIFIED,
EVERYTHING SO STATIC, SO SULK
AS IF NOTHING ABIDE'S
BOOKS ON MANTELPIECE
WINDOW WITH BEELINE HEAD
MOTIONLESS FAN WITH 3-HANDS
THAT, PARALYZED SHOE RACK
BREATHING THE ONLY DISTURBANCE
MYRIAD THOUGHTS'
KEPT ON ARISING
CONFLICT WITH SLEEP
PROVES TIRING
AND, SLOWLY SLOWLY
I AM DROWSING.....

Friday, October 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nights,stillness,thoughts,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 January 2016

Winter is a widely accepted subject for poems and here the poem so interesting.

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Valsa George 30 October 2015

Everything in the room induces drowsiness and you too slip slowly into a kind of weary slumber! The drab atmosphere of the winter night is projected through powerful images!

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