Sunday, December 7, 2008

Winter Vision Comments

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Slowly rays pierced
The cloud
And for a moment
I felt as if I'd been
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Edgardo Tugade 07 December 2008

I liked 3 of your poems: the Derry haiku, the Van Gogh morning, the Trace of Silver - you have good eyes and you describe well. Natural description without obvert 'message' is your forte.

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