Wednesday, November 12, 2014

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Science and arts
Play their parts
well in life
Money matters
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Suresh Dogra
sympathy
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Eric Ericson 12 November 2014

this is very good. I think the only thing I would change in this poem is the first two lines rhyme while none of the rest do. I think you should consider making everything rhyme or no rhymes at all. To me the second line feels cliche'.

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Suresh Dogra

Suresh Dogra

Punjab-India
Suresh Dogra
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Punjab-India
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