Wishes Poem by Kat 'Happy Girl' Happy

Wishes



They used to take me to a wishing well,
In the heart of a run-down shopping centre,
Seemed like thousands of pennies lay there dead,
Drowned by the shimmering blue water.

Hardly magical to an eight year old.
A few wasted pennies or a pathway to my dreams?
I didn't understand, wished for things I didn't need or that wouldn't come true anyway.
Money, Ponies, Beauty, Fame; Love didn't cross my mind.

Funny, now I need a wish, to save my breaking soul,
I wish I could control the world around me
I wish I didn't say the things I did,
I wish you didn't have to leave,

I wish we could stay friends forever,
But only nothing lasts that long.
I wish we could be eight again, carefree and happy,
Chasing the rainbows and dreams in our minds.

I wish I could find someone who returns my love,
Enough to refill the empty heart,
That's beating in my hand.
I wish that wishes came true.

Five years later they knocked down that shopping centre,
In its place stands a snazzy new housing estate,
Built on the wasted wishes and broken dreams of the hopefull.
The local people have gone back to hanging their hopes on the stars.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arthur Knackmus 09 February 2010

You gotta whatch what you wish for it is sorta like praying to Jesus who is God. If you don't think it would be an improvement don't ask for it. Think before you ask! Please read my 3 poems here and I will go back and read more of yours. I use my legal every day name cause I want people to know me. King Arthur

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