Withered Rose Poem by Zayne Venilos

Withered Rose



A rose I used to hold so dearly
cherishing it where ever I see
but why didn't I see it clearly?
How soon the rose did bloom

A rose I grew on such occasion
and gave it to her
As beautiful as any painting
she accepted it without hesitation

A rose that was blossoming
do you want to reminisce with me?
I nourished this rose every day
but it was too much for her to see

A rose that was slowly dying
but I ran out of water
I can't seem to get it off the ground
is this how it will decay?

A rose that turned black
just like the ground beneath it
Withered and torn
forever in the hole it deserves

Wednesday, December 3, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: rose
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Zayne Venilescos 04 December 2008

You fail to really see what its about. Its not about a rose, the rose is a symbol for something else.

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Wow a nice poem about a rose... You write very good... Krista

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Zayne Venilos

Zayne Venilos

Savannah, Georgia
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