Withered Rose Poem by Zayne Venilos

Withered Rose



A rose I used to hold so dearly
cherishing it where ever I see
but why didn't I see it clearly?
How soon the rose did bloom

A rose I grew on such occasion
and gave it to her
As beautiful as any painting
she accepted it without hesitation

A rose that was blossoming
do you want to reminisce with me?
I nourished this rose every day
but it was too much for her to see

A rose that was slowly dying
but I ran out of water
I can't seem to get it off the ground
is this how it will decay?

A rose that turned black
just like the ground beneath it
Withered and torn
forever in the hole it deserves

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zayne Venilescos 04 December 2008

You fail to really see what its about. Its not about a rose, the rose is a symbol for something else.

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Wow a nice poem about a rose... You write very good... Krista

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Zayne Venilos

Zayne Venilos

Savannah, Georgia
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