You Poem by Judy Hill

You

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I am dedicated to you,
But not appreciated by you.
You know everything I do,
It’s all for you.

Every time I feel I’m on a
One way street,
Continuously walking we
Never meet.

Why is this one sided?
Don’t you know how much
I love and care for you?
Trying so hard to be good to you.

Baby I’ll lay down my life for
The kids and you,
Because that’s what a true
Woman is suppose to do.

What do you want from me?

What am I doing wrong?

You answer these questions to this broken heart poem.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miranda S 05 December 2005

I liked how you tied in rhyme with a thought provoking concept...well done!

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Judy Hill

Judy Hill

Gary, Indiana
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