Sword Angel

Rookie (November 8 / New york city, Long beach)

You Are A Girl, Not A Soldier. - Poem by Sword Angel

I am a girl, I am a girl
I live in a house full of men
They say to me each day
With a cold heart that
Needs to be mend
'You are a girl not a soldier'
I wish they could see
See through my eyes
To my heart that beats
With each strand of day
I wish I could be
That beautiful soldier
The one you look up to
The one who would guard you
Through your restful sleep
They risk there lives for our safety
I would gladly die
For the truth people try to hide
A young lady that could be
A soldier of an army


Comments about You Are A Girl, Not A Soldier. by Sword Angel

  • Shekhar JoshiShekhar Joshi (6/7/2009 3:22:00 PM)

    of course u are a gurl not an soldier.............that's wht they think......y pay any attention to what they believe rather than what we believe.......

    good work
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  • Stephanie Dower (10/9/2008 5:12:00 PM)

    I can deffinately connect with this lovely poem as my sister is in the army.
    Both thumbs up! More please!
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  • Robert Whitney (10/9/2008 4:48:00 PM)

    great, a wonderfully high 10, please read some of my poems (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 15, 2008


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