You Are My Fate Poem by sara wiliams

You Are My Fate



you
take me
and I can not sleep tonight

you
break me
and I can not breath and fight

you
share me
with sorrow,
and most part of me
is now not yours

I am drowned
in hate

maybe as they say
it is not you
it is my fate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jurietta Duraan 12 April 2008

Stunning poem, Sara. I'm glad I checked in on you again. Write more!

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Brian Mills 10 December 2007

wowowowow! ! ! a very powerful piece you have created here.........although short....its very deep.....makes you think! ! loved it! ! Brian~

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