Randy Bullocks

Rookie (02/24/86 / Milwaukee, Wisconsin)

You Deserve - Poem by Randy Bullocks

Im just a guy with the ice box over my heart

you are the girl with the concert rose but maybe with your

warm kisses will melt the ice away from my heart, with my

touch that's smooth and gentle could crush the concert reveling a soft red rose

someone who sends you fresh red rose's when they blossom or maybe one who will

walk through the park holding your hand in cool autumn so let go to what you're holdin'

on I will be there to catch you when you're fallin' we can go float on cloud nine together

and land at place's you dream about


Comments about You Deserve by Randy Bullocks

  • Barbara Terry (3/21/2008 5:58:00 PM)

    I want to say that this is romantic, but it misses something. To tell a woman you love her, and you will be there for her, and take ehr to places of her choice, is romantic, but the way you say it here, isn't quite on the mark, though. What I mean is this; the following line, is what doesn't make sense:

    'making you deserve someone who's not going to take you to rock bottom you deserve'

    Without this line, this poem would definitely be romantic.

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara
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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 21, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, March 21, 2008


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