You Don'T Love Me Anymore Poem by Dead Ducky

You Don'T Love Me Anymore

Rating: 3.0


You're the brother,
That I wish I had.
You're the friend,
Who's always there.
You're my best friend,
Who drifted too far apart.
We could have been insepirable,
It's too bad,
You don't love me any more.
Not in the way I love d you.
I loved you more then my own brother,
But now,
You don't even count as the air he breathes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam Courtney 04 January 2009

I like the message your poem brings but i think the words could be a little better...keep working though it was pretty good!

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