Jeremiah Unknown

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You Girl - Poem by Jeremiah Unknown

A girl that makes me happy, a girl that makes me cry.
A girl that makes me laugh when all I wanna do is die.

A girl that understands, and will not turn her back.
A girl that understands that It's her promise that I lack.

You know you wanna kill me, you know you want me dead.
You know you wanna cock this slug and pump me full of lead.

I know you wanna do it, because you love me so.
I know you wanna do it, It's the only way to go!


Comments about You Girl by Jeremiah Unknown

  • (4/1/2008 4:56:00 PM)


    very good. i liked the transition from love to death. they say both love and death together make a hit song, a hit poem, a hit movie, or any other sort of hit. i give it a 9. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 1, 2008



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