You Made Me Love You.... Poem by Dev Robinson

You Made Me Love You....

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There is no other way to explain how you make me feel inside
When I am with you it is not easy to hide
....because you make me love you
Maybe these feelings are true because I only want to be with you
When I am near you I get this tingly sensation and there is no explanation
Maybe this feeling is true.... I don't know;
But it feels so good I just let it flow
I find myself melting when you touch me
Thats how I know how much you love me
I get this feeling of desire burning inside
....because you make me love you
All my troubles have gone away
This has to be a mistake
You make me feel brand new
And I want to spend the rest of my life with you
When that day comes I will say 'I do'
All because you made me love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 November 2009

Too many cliches, and mundane parlance, yet quite lyrical in style...Open up...there are no limits on Literatures creative spectrum. You have a decent foundation to work with...Read your contemporary Poets, and take heed to, and explore style & more capturing language...Good Luck & keep that pen pumping, young man. F j R

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Dev Robinson

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