Wednesday, November 19, 2014

You'Ve Inspired Too Many Letters... Comments

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You've inspired too many letters
too many poems
too many songs
To be someone I can't even consider a friend
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Lauren Beasley
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Eric Grief 19 November 2014

Interesting poem, I would have liked to read this poem a bit differently... if you could have been less literal in your wording, and perhaps described your inner turmoil then we as the reader could come to our own conclusion that this person was indeed a source of inspiration but now no longer part of your life... work on that.

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Lauren Beasley

Lauren Beasley

Roanoke, VA
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