Interesting poem, I would have liked to read this poem a bit differently... if you could have been less literal in your wording, and perhaps described your inner turmoil then we as the reader could come to our own conclusion that this person was indeed a source of inspiration but now no longer part of your life... work on that.
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Interesting poem, I would have liked to read this poem a bit differently... if you could have been less literal in your wording, and perhaps described your inner turmoil then we as the reader could come to our own conclusion that this person was indeed a source of inspiration but now no longer part of your life... work on that.