Sunday, June 16, 2013

You Were, You Are Comments

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I read your works and am shaken up inside-
All hackney sacked and alive
But still
At the same time-
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Kelly Seale 17 June 2013

Ther are so many things to say about this piece Summer...it tells the story, and unwinds to the finish, such clever verse and rhyme, it brings me in and captures me... not letting me go.You Were, You Are is poetic genius! Great Ink! ; -) Kelly.

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Gajanan Mishra 16 June 2013

from the emptiness of clay, flowers grow, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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