Friday, September 4, 2009

Your Lovely Layers Comments

Rating: 3.8

Crying, weeping, weeping, crying
We all know how hard you're trying
Don't let the fear overtake
Don't let your hopes it rake
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Alanna Taylor
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Siddharth Singh 19 November 2009

Incredible poem alanna, it rhymes like a song with numerous layers, in the form of different stanza's.

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Jaideep Garg 09 September 2009

a master piece... mam.... the way u rhymed it... its just oooosham....+10 for it mam...

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