Well I'm fifteen and have only just started writing my own lyrics, which I write guitar music to aswell. So any helpful comments would be great. (:
Every night I dream a dream of shining oh-so bright in that,
Inky velvet sky.
But there's always something stopping me.
Standing in the way of my destiny,
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I’ve seen you walking around town,
Holding your head up high,
‘Cos you know they’re looking at you.
But you’re so busy tryna be a tough man
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