I've been writing poetry for about four years. i dont have many poems but i would really appreciate any votes or comments on my poems.
Thanks
Works through thick and thin
Loves his family and all within
Sacrifices body and mind
So that everyone may find
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Love is a bond stronger then diamond
Once it has taken hold it will stay forever
Finding love can sometimes be misleading
The understanding of thinking your in love can often guide you in the wrong direction
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The deeper I get the harder I break
The closer I get the more they can take
The farther I am the less that they learn
The smaller I get the less that they burn
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This distance between us is slowly killing me on the inside
Its ripping and tearing but nothing is strong enough to break it
Our love is like a knot getting tighter and tighter
The more we pull on each other the closer we get
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I am not the man I once was
I am not the man I could have been
I am not the man that I foreseen
I am the better man
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