Some of my poems may be a bit rude and crude but thats just me. I dont write in a beautiful artistic way (mainly because I dont have the intellect) But I write to amuse myself and to compartmentalise how im feeling.
Im 24, got back from travelling two months ago and have been writting poems on and off for about 5 years. This is the first time I've been involved in anything like this but im more than willing to take critisism........ even if its not that constructive.
Finger tips and palms
Skim the surface of my skin
leg limbs and arms intertwine
I want to grin.
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Let me tell you something
About a thing or two
You should not give out feedback
On things you just dont know
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I often sit and think
And ponder if thinking is worthwhile
As the things I often think of
I could be doing now
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