Weel,
I'm not a proffesiional or anything(you can tell from my poems) , i'm really a kid who's trying to get better at writing poems so i can get an A. But i have really been enjoying it. I know that might sound really weird coming from a middle school student but it is True. Please comment on my poems and tell the truth. If it stinks, tell me that.
Basketball is a fun game,
it is not at all lame.
You get to shoot an orange ball,
The best players are very tall.
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I used to live there every day,
Now I dream of it every night.
It's not that I don't like it here,
I just want to go back home.
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The Bible is important because it' Gods word.
I talks of creation,
all seven days.
It tell of pharaoh,
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School Is Like The Ocean,
The bullys are the blue whales because they are gigantic,
The short people are the plankton because they are so small.
The sharks are some teachers because they are so mean and scary,
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