I love to write poems and books, and have been doing so since I was seven years old, as I was never popular in school and didn't have many friends. I hope to be a writer one day, so please tell me what you think of my poems, and be truthful. If it sucks, I'll change it. Thanks.
The little green monster,
Sat on my shoulder,
Watching in angst,
As my peers get bolder.
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I hate the way you looked at me,
I hate the way you stared.
I hate the way you flipped me off like you never even cared.
I hate the way you treated me,
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