Florida Angel

Rookie (Spring / Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach)

A Dream - Poem by Florida Angel

She sees him arriving,
Handsome tall guy,
He sees her smiling,
Mysterious tall girl,
Her eyes grab his sight,
to her he comes on a flight:
May I? A sit he takes,
Her breath he hears,
His dreams she sees…
Their hands they hold,
Together they live
Forever a dream.

Comments about A Dream by Florida Angel

  • Rookie - 0 Points Salvie Rosales (3/29/2010 8:48:00 AM)

    Great piece...short and quick to read but forever will live....lovely.. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,176 Points Muhammad Shanazar (10/23/2007 10:10:00 AM)

    Very nice poem, in fact pure love in this world is not found, if the lover find real love in the world, it will be a matter of fortune, and the rest of life they live in dream though it is the conscious world of man.Take care.
    Shanazar (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ivor Hogg (8/21/2007 7:59:00 AM)

    simple and elegant it does happen that way sometimes and with luck it lasts (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marci Made (7/31/2007 1:12:00 PM)

    Now this is just plain great........way beyond and better than Two Smiles.....love it...and btw...........slow as heck getting in here today, AGAIN, thought it was fixed.. m.m. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jack Tex (7/29/2007 12:54:00 PM)

    This is simply colossal. You have a great way of describing things and that's so something. Thanks a hell lot for sharing.

    Warm Regards
    Mohammad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raveendran . (7/29/2007 8:32:00 AM)

    Beautiful, simple, present... thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Meggie Gultiano (7/21/2007 7:25:00 AM)

    Wow! a very romantic poem! i can feel it..i hope there's a part II on this. lovely! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 19, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 22, 2011

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