Treasure Island

Geetha Jayakumar

(Kerala Palakkad)

A Falling Star


I Am a falling star
Before falling
It will shine so bright
Like the last laugh on ones face
Before fall.
What brightness
It can spread on falling.
Its all shine shattered
Like a winged broken bird,
When it can never fly.
With shine reflected on each pieces shattered.
A twinkling star looked so beautiful,
Which bring smile on innocent child's face,
With a twinkling eyes it gazes stars around.
May you spread happiness as long as
You are the twinkle of ones eyes around!

Submitted: Friday, December 13, 2013
Edited: Friday, December 13, 2013

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Sumi Nair
Submitted: Friday, October 04,2013
Edited: Tuesday, November 05,2013

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  • Akhtar Jawad (8/30/2014 11:35:00 PM)

    The open beauties of this poem are so much appealing that one starts thinking what are the hidden beauties of it, and when the hidden beauties are exposed one starts loving this poem. What a poem Geetha! (Report) Reply

  • Suman Kumar Das (3/2/2014 9:23:00 AM)

    May all your inks always shine like stars.............. every time I get inspired reading your write.Thank you for sharing, Madam! (Report) Reply

  • Rohit Sapra (12/23/2013 4:42:00 AM)

    The poem is really good although, you are not a falling star. Please do not ever lose hope. (Report) Reply

  • Dee Corpolongo (12/22/2013 11:36:00 PM)

    Beautiful, my friend....and may it shine right to the end....where it still will be as beautiful...
    for beauty is in the eye of the beholder! Liked this poem very much. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (12/13/2013 1:30:00 AM)

    Suman Kumar Das(12/8/2013 1: 21: 00 AM)
    I Am a falling star....................... excellent work........liked it


    Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair(10/20/2013 6: 21: 00 AM)
    There is no such thing as a falling star
    To new galaxies they go and twinkle
    And they are yet never too far
    In memories you can hear them tinkle

    (good work Madam and welcome to my page) (Report) Reply

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