Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 6,676 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

A Happy World With Grace

O' Lord the holy divine
So adorable You are mine,
Will You be only giving advices
And the rulings all the time?

Give me your magical touch
Of your kindness and peace,
I don't mind to die even
To get Your touch of bliss.

Love me and show me
The path of eternal peace,
I'd love to see Your blessing
Be showered on every being.

I do dream a world with -
Complete love and peace,
No hatred no extortion -
But a happy world with grace.

O' Lord my near and so dear
Can You listen to me please,
Off and on in some moments
Give Your touch of love.

O' Lord you forget me not
I await with hunger-
To be drenched and saturated
With Your endless love and peace.
Amitava (14.04.2014)


Submitted: Monday, April 14, 2014
Edited: Saturday, July 19, 2014

Topic of this poem: Peace

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is a poem what I wrote when I am getting tired to to see this world to be blood stained with continued hatred and extortions all over.

Comments about this poem (A Happy World With Grace by Amitava Sur )

  • Bronze Star - 2,851 Points Patricia Grantham (4/18/2014 9:28:00 AM)

    An excellent prayer asking God to give us a world of peace. Peace
    begins with us and we have to be the vessel that it courses through.
    Your sincere thoughts rises like the sun and shines its beauty all
    over PH. Well done and a beautiful call for peace. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,849 Points Kevin Patrick (4/16/2014 10:41:00 PM)

    A great call to arms for the peace of God, and the hope of peace. Hatred surrounds us, but so does love, we are creatures who search for love but only find conflict. A great prayer, and call to peace. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,106 Points Hans Vr (4/16/2014 12:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, Amitava.
    Actually, I think we are quite well on the way to a happy world with grace.
    Were it not from the media, magnifying and repetitively reporting all blood stained events, it would be much easier to see that world is getting better, really better day by day. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,760 Points Lorraine Colon (4/15/2014 4:42:00 PM)

    If your prayer is answered, the whole world will rejoice! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,180 Points Valsa George (4/15/2014 1:07:00 AM)

    The supplication of a soul who wishes to see the world removed of all hatred and filled with divine love....! When we are rid of hatred, this world will appear immensely beautiful and all of us need that healing touch from Him to remain blissful... A very sweet and ardent prayer! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,842 Points Roseann Shawiak (4/14/2014 1:04:00 AM)

    Absolutely divine, Amitava. A perfect poem, I love it very much. Totally near and dear to
    my heart. 10 -10's for this one. It's seriously beautiful! (Report) Reply

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