I know an amazing girl
Whom I honor and adore.
I regard her, respect her
I love to love her more.
That innocent girl moving out-
From her home to unknown
A girl having no idea
About the thorns laid down around
She moved out with her tiny wings
From home to the open world,
Very helplessly lost her youth
To a devilish savage demon.
She lives now a normal life
Apparently seems to,
Burying all her dreams within
She is camouflaging every now.
I don't want her to moan further
She should not feel forlorn.
My heart cries for her
Cannot digest her pains.
I like to see her with a smiling face again
Peace prevail on her besides any pain.
I love her and adore her
With my heart and my soul.
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Amitava (27.6.2014)
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Amitava......You could step into her shoes and feel for her....! Around us, there are many such who camouflage their pain and live on! Very sincere expression of feelings!
I like this poem, Amitava and I like the way you still adore her in your heart and wish ty Go make life easier for her. May God bless you both...
This beautiful poem gives an account of what a golden heart you have! You are treasured with a kind and compassionate heart that cries with the sad plight of an innocent girl having to bear a lifelong scar, camouflaging it under a pseudo smile. Let her move on! What has happened to her, cannot be undone. If she gets love, respect and adoration from people like you on her way, she might feel relieved and reassured.
Returned to read this heartfelt and beautiful poem about someone you care about, it is an amazing write! The fact that your heart always cries for her is soul touching and beautiful, you are such a loving, caring man indeed! Thank you, Amitava. RoseAnn
a great emotional writing. words from the heart. of a passionate person
This was written with such feelings of intensity. Your inner thoughts really came out in this write Amitava, . Very good.
A very impressive and sad poem, we can only condemn such demons and for the innocent girl our love and sympathy.
so deep thought... a lady tries to face the evil world but gets nothing instead of troubles.... hats of to that lady who hides her pain and lives normally... trying to be strong... she's actually brave. she knows that no one is beside her and she does all by herself... lovely that you could understand her pain...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Amitava, a beautiful, heart rending rendition of someone who has tried to live her life against all odds. What a tribute to this innocent girl, you have given in this poem. Your heart shines from within your words, what a kind and compassionate man you truly are. I love this poem.