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Dwi utami

(11-11-1986 / Ngawi.jawa timur)

A Remember

I'still remember always story of my mother.
Story about the heaven, when I'can having a peaceful and calmed.
As manna is my dish on there, an angel sitting near at me.
Then angels singing about peaceful heart songs.
When I'saw everything are beautiful, as everything is shining.
This is a great creation of the Lord.
Gift for everyone that giving love, having kindness, and the sweet words.
I'still remember always story of my mother.
Story about the hell.when the hell is beautiful place for devils.
Then full human a heart buring, puffed up, greedy, like a playing gamble.
The God will be enter they are within the hell.
I'still remember always story of my mother.
When in everyday I'saw butterfly so kind with a flowers fly and playing clouds above.
A birdies in every morning singing with joyful.
A birdies sitting in the twig, inviting me for star my grace full day.
And wake up from my dreams last night.
I'still remember always story of my mother.
Story about a prayer.
When she is teach me, how makes a perfection prayers.
So that God hear of my pray and fill peaceful my heart, senses, and my life.
I'still remember always***#

Submitted: Friday, July 16, 2010

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/17/2010 10:53:00 AM)

    Excellent Tribute not only to your Dear Mom but to all Moms…Glory Unto Mom… congrats for sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
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