Fay Slimm

Rookie - 33 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Ageless Aurora. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Folds are unfolding, colour rainbowing
Within black velvet fields of midnight sky.
Aurora comes nigh.
Random smooth movement, streams of lowering
Magnetic silk take control, our sighing
As Aurora rides by is eclipsed now
By her billowing dance. Cohorts captured,
She flickers charged veils until dawn, vowing
To outstage the Sun. Then performs rapturous
Solar displays with breathtaking changes.
Aurora flies high.
This luminous beauty beguiles all ages.
Aurora's not shy.


Comments about Ageless Aurora. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich2 (4/9/2009 8:41:00 AM)

    Of course, what did I expect? No less than perfection in this intriguing poem. I must admit that I see a kinship here with another writer that I had not noticed before.
    The grace and care with which the deeper thoughts are presented to the reader is brilliant.

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (4/8/2009 5:05:00 PM)

    Rich and vivid portrayal of the Northern Lights, thank you Fay,
    10
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  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (4/8/2009 3:49:00 PM)

    Aurora Borealis, ahh those northern lights delight like your poetry fay... Andy 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sue Sie (4/8/2009 3:17:00 PM)

    Beautiful portrayal of the Aurora....well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (4/8/2009 3:04:00 PM)

    A fabulous natural phenomona described so beautifully by your gentle mind Fay.... wonderful read...thank you...Fi 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ali Colby (4/8/2009 2:49:00 PM)

    Very descripted, i felt as if i was watching the aurora. Great poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 8, 2009


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