Akhtar Jawad Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

Rating: 5.0


Carry the devil too old,
Otherwise, masculine gold,
Devil's fussiness,
Devil's business,
Control my poems bold.

Saturday, September 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poets
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 10 September 2016

Akhtar Jawad, the bold, gold, never too old poet

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2016

Thanks Kelly Kurt, you are one of my teachers.

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Khalid Saifullah 10 September 2016

A difficult work for a poet to write a poem on himself, nicely done.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2020

Carry the devil too old, Otherwise, masculine gold, DeviI's fussiness, DeviI's business, Control my poems bold/// interesting

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 13 September 2016

God bless! Valsa and Kelly have said all that is to be said about you. I can only stand by their side and salute. (10)

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Valsa George 13 September 2016

This self sketch has become more a caricature.....! You have nothing to do with the devil as far as we understand. I don't either think you are old! You are perhaps the naughtiest young poet of poem hunter....! May you shine like gold through your poems!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 September 2016

That's a wonder poem on Akhtar Jawad. I loved the way you described yourself, but........ May i add, that a poet can never be old. His mind remains ever young. You have a young, stunning collection of golden poems! :) Enjoyed reading this piece Akhtar Sahab!

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Rajnish Manga 11 September 2016

Wow! A wonderful poem where devil occupies a bigger space than the man under reference. But thank God, the man with his substantial volume wins the bout. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks..

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