An Intruder Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir
An Intruder
Thou came and won my heart,
I was not ready for that
Yet I sacrificed my ego
At the altar of thy love.
I honoured thy desire
Dishonouring mine,
I illumined thy world Darkening mine,
I inhabited thy heart
Deserting mine.
But all of a sudden
What happened?
Thou shifted the fragrance of thy love
To someone else,
Thou lighted his heart
from
The pyre of my love,
Thou robbed me
Of my love, my emotions,
And
even my dreams,
Thou came into my world stealthily,
Thou were an intruder.
True to life. Your poems have a true sense of reality. They are very relatable. tfs.
a heart betrayed by treachery, asking the qestion why to the intruder, first to occupy his heart and stealthly leaving it for another. great poignat poem.
Wow! Really nice poem describing a love with jilt in an interesting style along with charming language. I like it very much.
Thou came and won my heart, I was not ready for that Yet I sacrificed my ego At the altar of thy love..... yes right time to act, , good poem...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Painful. Poet has special way in directing his emotion through words. direct, compact and complete. Good piece of work from Mohd Akmal Nazir.