I want to make it quite clear.....
my heart is not a thoroughfare.
i long for never-never land
for honest people, nice and fair.
no joys i find in shallow world
im fed up of this love-sick air.
wipe out these tears and hold the grief
i don't have too much time to share.
but darkness can't be a horrid thing
sun shines through this mist of despair.
friends oft misinterpret my love
they judge me but by surface layer.
so time is up, so words are spent,
so i intend to go, ....but where?
Misinterpretation of love can be an anarchy/ A well-written poem! ! ! !
Misinterpretation of love can be an anarchy/ A well-written poem! ! ! !
sun shines through this mist of despair' is no doubt a very beautiful line. The whole poem is replete with deep ideas.
sun shines through this mist of despair' is no doubt a very beautiful line. The whole poem is replete with deep ideas.
I long for never never land for honest people nice and fair, nice quote Shahzia, so do I but it is hard to find in this world. good write enjoyed
Sun shines through this mist of hope...... When we are able to behold a silver lining amid dark clouds, we can be sure that not all is lost! When hope springs from despair, life remains never a burden, but one of sweet anticipation! An enjoyable read!
Wow! ! ! The starting lines are so pleasurable and got my whole attention. Love the attitude! ! ! I want to make it quite clear..... my heart is not a thoroughfare. Lovely! ! ! im fed up of this love-sick air. I just loved the attitude in this poem! ! ! :)
at last a liberating free thinking poem.... this shows such strength and lifted my spirits....you write as my sister thinks.... no holds barred...loved it...tyvm karen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lolzzz....whop! took a great swipe at the site enjoyed it :)