Fay Slimm

Rookie - 86 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

April Washed. - Poem by Fay Slimm

March gone, I return April washed, ready
For writing once more, my exciting dreams
Needing a pen nudge me, with steady
Muse again daily, poetic scheming
Of verse is now a prime motive, romantic
New thoughts jostle for space as they line up
For lines. Gyrating inside pedanticly,
Metres emerge as desire becomes sated
And verses are birthed. So friends I appear
Among you again refreshed and rested,
Heart full of thanks for your care, I feel clear
And eager to write, - at least, trying my best.

Comments about April Washed. by Fay Slimm

  • Deva De Silva (4/16/2009 9:28:00 AM)

    You sound ready indeed... Speaking my mind through your lines... always here to hear you speak through your keyboard! (Report) Reply

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  • Robert Howard (4/11/2009 10:53:00 PM)

    Your lovely poem touches close to home. I have been more or less pried away from writing poetry by work (a good thing) and bad politics associated with work (a decidedly bad thing.) I look forward to reading your new creations. (Report) Reply

  • Bob Blackwell (4/9/2009 1:37:00 PM)

    Fay, glad your back, just keep on writing wonderful poetry like this one. It must be spring. Warm regards Bob 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Kevin Wells (4/9/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    fay...you have such a wonderful following and all such talented writers, I hardly need to say 'welcome back' but...I say it anyway. Welcome back. (Report) Reply

  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (4/9/2009 7:49:00 AM)

    Great to have you back. I am on the merry-go-round again of my favorite pastime. I have a couple of new poems. A Poet's Poetical Love is written for a poet here who calls me Grannie. It appears his Grannie died, so I would love to hear your comments.

    Thanks Fay

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (4/9/2009 7:46:00 AM)

    I could feel your fresh and happy approach again to your love of words. Beautifully written and most happily received by me. (Report) Reply

  • Sameer Ahmed (4/9/2009 1:14:00 AM)

    A very wonderful and unique way to greet everyone after a break.......We welcome you again and wish to see more of your magical work as time flows.....


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  • Bonnie Collins (4/8/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    Very nicely written with such a peacefull feel... Now if I could modivate myself to do this, ....... (Report) Reply

  • Aarif Ameen (4/8/2009 12:10:00 AM)

    nice work
    good luck (Report) Reply

  • Carl Harris (4/7/2009 9:44:00 AM)

    Well, I am glad to hear you are rested and refreshed, Fay, as I came to your page this morning needing a little lift of my spirits and found it almost immediately with this charming poem! It's always a delight to read your sparkling poetry and this fine poem is no exception. It is, as all of your fine poems are, very expressive and well written. And now that your are back and churning out your marvellous writes, we all know that spring has at last come! Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (4/6/2009 4:44:00 PM)

    The eternal springtime of your poetic soul is very present
    in these eloquent lines. Welcome back, Fay.10,
    for you.


    SandraX (Report) Reply

  • Juneil Sechico (4/6/2009 12:08:00 AM)

    what a wash! very fresh! wish I can wash my poetic style and have a new style! Bravo fay! (Report) Reply

  • Myrtle Thomas Myrtle Thomas (4/5/2009 8:16:00 PM)

    I found this very inspiring as to the enjoyment of writing and being refreshed.A very refreshing way to look at writing. Your visuals were very clear.A great read I enjoyed a 10 (Report) Reply

  • James B. Earley (4/4/2009 10:19:00 PM)

    Analogous with springtime...we welcome you........'refreshed..rested....and April washed! ' Looking forward to perusing your 'exciting dreams.' (Report) Reply

  • Lynda Robson (4/4/2009 10:48:00 AM)

    Welcome back Fay, you have been missed,
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Fiona Davidson (4/4/2009 9:49:00 AM)

    Fay...it is such a delight to see your beautiful poetry once more being posted...welcome back hug....Fi....10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Catrina Heart (4/4/2009 8:53:00 AM)

    What else i have to say except...........

    'WELCOME BACK MY FRIEND'.........good to see and hear from you once again! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Wojja Fink (4/4/2009 4:01:00 AM)

    hello Fay, welcome home to April in colour
    best wishes
    ooooohh springtime, it always seems so new, like the first time you've seen it (Report) Reply

  • Alison Cassidy (4/4/2009 2:40:00 AM)

    This is rather clever Fay - such a light touch, too. I can see your thoughts pegged on the line and smell the fresh scent of spring flowers on them as you fold them, ready for the iron. Delighted that the muse has returned and look forward to seeing you in print on a regular basis. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/4/2009 2:02:00 AM)

    most splendid of a write indeed.. Yea.. you back! ! just so excited. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, April 17, 2009

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