Rigzin Namgyal

Rookie - 137 Points (9 may / India)

Auburn Beauty - Poem by Rigzin Namgyal

there lives a girl who's sugar and sweet
it was destiny that made us meet
armed with a cannon this pretty ' engineer '
is all set to conquer the world and domineer
' a magic surrounds this girl '..i saw a truth fairy declare
so in my poem..i try bring her pure naked soul to bare
she's courageous, dauntless, gritty and ' brave
all these qualities in her..is what i rave
one look at her will take u on a flight to heaven
that is the magic of this ' dusky ' raven
hates people who do fag and smoke
is tht why? ? ? in front of her sinners like me tremble n choke
she doesn't believe in the word ' impossible '
coz anything for her is achievable
loves readin the world of angels and demons
then into her own little world she crayons
Oh! her beauty every poet does crave
this ' nymph ' can make any poet her slave
her pictures are poetry spilling from every frame
thats the unseen talent of this ' brunette dame '
a poem of ' emotions ' surging ahead like a stream
these images come alive..talk, romance, orate, cry n scream
her camera goes click, click, click showing you her creative prowess
that is the fictive power of this auburn duchess
though miles separate us one thing keeps us glued
its our love for one common thing that is food
i saw a canary flying by..as it cooingly sang
that ' her n me ' do make a perfect gang '
if God asked me for a ' wish ' that i could transgress
it would b getting drunk in the beauty of this brown sorceress
' I ' would be willing to be in His slender chains
if in the labyrinths with my ' gang ' i was to forever detain


Comments about Auburn Beauty by Rigzin Namgyal

  • Gold Star - 9,829 Points Amitava Sur (1/13/2014 12:20:00 AM)

    A pleasure in reading the poem, lovely expression of the beauty & nice flow of words. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,653 Points Patricia Grantham (10/5/2013 10:41:00 PM)

    Very nicely written and full of passionate words.
    An auburn beauty that captivates and mesmerizes.
    Strung by her charm and left tied up. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (10/3/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    sweet and very romantic nice ink (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (10/12/2012 4:41:00 AM)

    Marvelous. Very romantic. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Swetha Vanakayalapati (9/28/2012 7:28:00 AM)

    enjoyable wriite...so simple and absolute sensuality the poem has got! ! ..! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/23/2012 4:41:00 PM)

    Chocolicious write...i liked and enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,201 Points Saadat Tahir (8/26/2012 12:59:00 AM)

    nice lines...meander like the love lorn thoughts of a youthful heart

    lovely write

    cheers
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 25, 2011


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