Rigzin Namgyal

Rookie - 8 Points (9 may / India)

beautiful girl


beautiful girl, beautiful girl
you are so powerful
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
i should have drawn a line
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
how i bring myself out of your spell
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
now that you are so beautiful
and i am ruined

Submitted: Saturday, November 26, 2011
Edited: Sunday, November 18, 2012

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  • Gold Star - 13,178 Points Chinedu Dike (12/29/2014 9:26:00 AM)

    Vain glorification of beauty comes with distress or tragedy in the bliss of love. A nice poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,116 Points * Sunprincess * (11/18/2012 9:27:00 PM)

    oh rigzin..some beautiful girls love to talk to guys also..so just be yourself
    and don't let anyone's beauty keep you from being their friend..maybe if
    you be a friend to her she will also be your friend..enjoyed this one. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,025 Points Hazel Durham (11/18/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    Powerful poem with a sad ending, this is a plea from the heart, how beauty can destroy so easily! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 841 Points Unwritten Soul (11/18/2012 5:56:00 AM)

    Ah! So simple but you did express what you want tell more..it will be more sweeter if you add some detail, , , But Rigzin this is a good work! keep writing and try smething new in every write, and challenge yourself to do better each time for new write..you can do it! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (11/18/2012 3:32:00 AM)

    Good! By using the word beautiful girl again and again, your poem is so strong what u'd like to highlight.Thanks for inviting me.I give u vote 8. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shiela Marie Anunciacion (11/17/2012 6:15:00 AM)

    I must agree with Saadat Tahir, it's almost like a nursery rhyme... well versed and well written, easily memorized and easily imagine... a beautiful girl who captured the poet's heart and now he is ruin for other girls.. simple and innocent but with hidden power. Good job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 695 Points Saadat Tahir (5/18/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    thanx for the invite.... :)

    its like a Aesop fable....almost rhymed to nursery style
    well written

    tc (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,172 Points Wahab Abdul (1/8/2012 5:21:00 AM)

    beautiful poem..i like it..i enjoyed it too....i rated it highly...please read my new poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sajna Kailas (1/1/2012 4:38:00 AM)

    beautiful poem, beautiful poem
    your poem is so powerful
    beautiful work, beautiful work
    i will give my top marks for this!
    keep it up Rigzin! ! ! (Report) Reply

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