Rigzin Namgyal

(9 may / India)

beautiful girl


beautiful girl, beautiful girl
you are so powerful
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
i should have drawn a line
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
how i bring myself out of your spell
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
now that you are so beautiful
and i am ruined

Submitted: Saturday, November 26, 2011
Edited: Sunday, November 18, 2012

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  • * Sunprincess * (11/18/2012 9:27:00 PM)

    oh rigzin..some beautiful girls love to talk to guys also..so just be yourself
    and don't let anyone's beauty keep you from being their friend..maybe if
    you be a friend to her she will also be your friend..enjoyed this one. :) (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (11/18/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    Powerful poem with a sad ending, this is a plea from the heart, how beauty can destroy so easily! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (11/18/2012 5:56:00 AM)

    Ah! So simple but you did express what you want tell more..it will be more sweeter if you add some detail, , , But Rigzin this is a good work! keep writing and try smething new in every write, and challenge yourself to do better each time for new write..you can do it! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Aung Si (11/18/2012 3:32:00 AM)

    Good! By using the word beautiful girl again and again, your poem is so strong what u'd like to highlight.Thanks for inviting me.I give u vote 8. (Report) Reply

  • Shiela Marie Anunciacion (11/17/2012 6:15:00 AM)

    I must agree with Saadat Tahir, it's almost like a nursery rhyme... well versed and well written, easily memorized and easily imagine... a beautiful girl who captured the poet's heart and now he is ruin for other girls.. simple and innocent but with hidden power. Good job! (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (5/18/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    thanx for the invite.... :)

    its like a Aesop fable....almost rhymed to nursery style
    well written

    tc (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (1/8/2012 5:21:00 AM)

    beautiful poem..i like it..i enjoyed it too....i rated it highly...please read my new poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Sajna Kailas (1/1/2012 4:38:00 AM)

    beautiful poem, beautiful poem
    your poem is so powerful
    beautiful work, beautiful work
    i will give my top marks for this!
    keep it up Rigzin! ! ! (Report) Reply

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