Rigzin Namgyal (9 may / India)

Ruined by love, we can all relate to that. Good poem. Thanks

what do you mean actually

wee but cute poem..kp writing...

I loved it! ! It sounds like you really like a girl - tell her if you do! ! :)

oh rigzin..some beautiful girls love to talk to guys also..so just be yourself
and don't let anyone's beauty keep you from being their friend..maybe if
you be a friend to her she will also be your friend..enjoyed this one. :)

Powerful poem with a sad ending, this is a plea from the heart, how beauty can destroy so easily!

Ah! So simple but you did express what you want tell more..it will be more sweeter if you add some detail, , , But Rigzin this is a good work! keep writing and try smething new in every write, and challenge yourself to do better each time for new write..you can do it! _Soul

Good! By using the word beautiful girl again and again, your poem is so strong what u'd like to highlight.Thanks for inviting me.I give u vote 8.

I must agree with Saadat Tahir, it's almost like a nursery rhyme... well versed and well written, easily memorized and easily imagine... a beautiful girl who captured the poet's heart and now he is ruin for other girls.. simple and innocent but with hidden power. Good job!

Hmm. So cute the poem is! Lovely.