Dr Hitesh Sheth

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Audacity To Hope - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

When the recession of opportunities
Knock downs, towns and cities;
When the flood of tension
Hits alike, huts and mansions;
When anxiety tortures life's moments
And men wallows in teary torments;
When life is anything but easy
And only head shrinkers seems busy

Then, oh! Men
It is time to stand still
As ancient hills
of indomitable will
Which braves
Fiery storms
And wintry chills:

And your audacious hope
Should strive to climb
steep recession's slope,
tightly holding
divine grace's rope

Till in boom
The flood of recession wanes
Clouds of opportunities rains
And mad lives again becomes sane.

Dr Hitesh C Sheth

28/02/2009


Comments about Audacity To Hope by Dr Hitesh Sheth

  • Gold Star - 8,703 Points Savita Tyagi (8/7/2012 10:21:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem to lift up any body's spirit. Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (8/3/2009 2:10:00 AM)

    Shashendra Amalshan (8/3/2009 2: 08: 00 AM)
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    Hello sir,



    'When anxiety tortures life’s moments
    And men wallows in teary torments;
    When life is anything but easy
    And only head shrinkers seems busy'

    I should say when this kinda thing happens, turn to Dr Hitesh Sith, cause he will always heal you with his poetic therapies

    'And your audacious hope
    Should strive to climb
    steep recession’s slope,
    tightly holding
    divine grace’s rope'

    I like these expressions too.... Lot to think here, ..
    I think you'v expressed yourself in a very poetic and creative manner..
    A psychologist can always gives you treatments, but not many can do it in such a innovative way I think..
    Great talent indeed

    Splendid write...

    with loves
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Duh Huh (6/23/2009 11:51:00 AM)

    Wow, this poem captivated me from the title. Its well thought out and thouught provoking. I loved the ending.

    Till in boom
    The flood of recession wanes
    Clouds of opportunities rains
    And mad lives again becomes sane.

    The audacity of hope. Love it, thank you so much for sharing your talent with us :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Kranthi Pothineni (4/9/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    Its an amazing write. Very well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 85 Points Mark R Slaughter (3/16/2009 4:09:00 AM)

    And such is the boom and bust spell that we live under! Very nicely put - I like the cynical hit at the end - yes it's all insane.
    Mark (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (3/14/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    A good protrayal of our boom and bust world. Unfortunately its the people who live in huts who suffer the most and..... also make less noise. 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sonya Florentino (3/10/2009 8:51:00 AM)

    we all need to hold on as a global family... and if we do surive, I think the world will be the wiser with the hard lesson learnt.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Vaibhav Pandey (3/8/2009 12:05:00 PM)

    a brilliant poem, sir....title is perfect for the poem...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (3/6/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    this recession is not fully true...since the boom or the bullish trend before was'nt also fully true...the common people had fallen a pray to the boom which snayched their money to fill someone's booty...genuinity is what will pullus out (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,613 Points Seema Chowdhury (3/4/2009 8:53:00 AM)

    thanks alot for sharing. this is a nice, true and thought provoking poem. really enjoyed your deep thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/2/2009 7:41:00 AM)

    When the tough gets goin, and the goin gets tough. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,359 Points C. P. Sharma (3/2/2009 7:12:00 AM)

    Dr., you are right. Recession subdues audacious hope and revokes love for the Lord. Good poetry.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (3/2/2009 2:14:00 AM)

    Nice poem contented with a nice message, poemwise is also too good, impressived, thanks dear Dr.Hitesh,10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, March 4, 2013


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