I heard about you long before I saw your face
I heard about your family, exploits, travel
They even said you played soft chords
On your guitar on moonless nights
Invited to your home, I expected to see
Someone extraordinary
I saw your hands first drawing aside the curtains
I saw your eyes then looking at me in silence
I saw your smile then and my poems became reality
We spoke about cities, countries, humanity
Beloved, don't share these moments with somebody else
Beloved, be gentle with my life
Beloved, leave me these instants of grace
And one day please let me touch your face
And say to you: Beloved.
Gentle and captivating expression. Simply superb. To read your free flowing verse is greatly refreshing.
The last stanza really pulled this together beautifully, My favourite part: They even said you played soft chords On your guitar on moonless nights Thankyou for sharing it Love duncan X
i'm simply touched of your finest touches...............good job
a master piece indeed... its just fantastic mam..... the lines with forms rhyme were saw your smile then and my poems became reality We spoke about cities, countries, humanity with a tint of love at first sight... well written mam..
I can sense a sincere and pure love and admiration in these words. A moving piece. Keep smiling and keep writing, Robert
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so heartfelt love poem, thanks for sharing