Blaming The Moon. Poem by Fay Slimm
Blaming The Moon.
Oh ominous moon - - pale portent of doom.
White luminous disk, suspended aloft
Thick blanket of black shot thru' with bright
Shiny catseyes of light, coating in soft
Unearthly glimmer this earthy-dark night,
Shine out your lovers' lantern-like gleaming
On harvested fields, waiting, like me- - - for
Moonstruck insanity, aided by dreaming,
Invaded my heart, broke down the door
To resistance, - - now ecstasy's hidden
In clandestine moments, - - oh wanton moon
Which with passion bewitches us - - bidden
By lunacy-love, he comes hurrying soon
To my arms yet again to set me aflame.
Oh moonbeaming night it is you I shall blame.! !
a very rare expression blaming the moon but with good deliverance..very nice and a wonderful piece... Ency Bearis
You really know what you're doing, Fay and I bet you're so proud each time you write another.This one makes me hold my breath.Oh the illicit insanity.Best wishes.Kev
Beatifully full of passion and vivid imagery. Wonderully phrased. A 10 again Fay
Ominous moon has mesmerized mind with extra-ordinary beauty. Unearthly glimmer we notice at deep night. Moon is hero of all creatures and moon sings the peace sing for all. We shall blame for moon-beaming at night with joy and reflection. This poem is outstanding poem...10
Been a long time since I read anything this romantic.Goosebumps! Chuck
loonies at high tide, lovely mix of passion and compassion, reflecting reflections enchanting and urging 10 cheers Shimon
Fay, this is truly a wonderful write, images of love under the celestial moon, how romantic, makes me wish I was back courting...walking down those quiet country lanes. Not really though when I think of all the trouble that was to come. 10/10 Bob xx
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I would like to translate this poem
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you are an ageless minx Fay, great piece Tom 10/10