Treasure Island

Fay Slimm

(Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Blaming the Moon.


Oh ominous moon - - pale portent of doom.
White luminous disk, suspended aloft
Thick blanket of black shot thru' with bright
Shiny catseyes of light, coating in soft
Unearthly glimmer this earthy-dark night,
Shine out your lovers' lantern-like gleaming
On harvested fields, waiting, like me- - - for
Moonstruck insanity, aided by dreaming,
Invaded my heart, broke down the door
To resistance, - - now ecstasy's hidden
In clandestine moments, - - oh wanton moon
Which with passion bewitches us - - bidden
By lunacy-love, he comes hurrying soon
To my arms yet again to set me aflame.
Oh moonbeaming night it is you I shall blame.! !

Submitted: Sunday, September 28, 2008
Edited: Sunday, September 28, 2008

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  • Shimon Weinroth (10/12/2008 11:08:00 AM)

    loonies at high tide, lovely mix of passion and compassion, reflecting reflections
    enchanting and urging 10
    cheers
    Shimon (Report) Reply

  • Bob Blackwell (10/9/2008 1:29:00 PM)

    Fay, this is truly a wonderful write, images of love under the celestial moon, how romantic, makes me wish I was back courting...walking down those quiet country lanes. Not really though when I think of all the trouble that was to come. 10/10 Bob xx (Report) Reply

  • Carl Harris (10/8/2008 1:54:00 PM)

    This wonderful poem is bursting with romanticism in nearly every line, Fay, and your imagery in it is quite impressive as well. It is a passionate statement of longing and surrendering to lust, and your title fits this poem perfectly, particularly
    should you need an excuse! Just a delightful write from beginning to end. Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (10/3/2008 4:14:00 AM)

    The moon paints a magical landscape and you have captured its essence perfectly.
    Lovely poem. Ten without hesitation.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Kevin Eaglesfield (9/28/2008 4:40:00 PM)

    You really know what you're doing, Fay and I bet you're so proud each time you write another.This one makes me hold my breath.Oh the illicit insanity.Best wishes.Kev (Report) Reply

  • Ency Bearis (9/28/2008 1:55:00 PM)

    a very rare expression blaming the moon but with good deliverance..very nice
    and a wonderful piece...

    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

  • Kris Smith (9/28/2008 11:34:00 AM)

    Everything about this piece of work is perfection content, metre, feeling, Fay you are right you are ageless and passionate and a pleasure to read more please Chris 10 x (Report) Reply

  • David Threadgold (9/28/2008 11:30:00 AM)

    Hi Fay. Where did this one come from. I dont think you can blame the moon it sounds to real to me. The pen writes from experience I think? or maybe a dark horse is lurking out there somewhere. only kidding a very nice peice well done **10** for sure. All the best Dave T (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (9/28/2008 10:51:00 AM)

    Yeah! Moon is so cruel to lovers. Beautifully expressed passion, love and disappointemtn.........................10+++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

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