Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,822 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Blindness - Poem by Aftab Alam

‘Tis a style to say, I’ve nothing to loose
I know, there to loose, the faith they choose
One wants to be free, wants to be a king
Character with rocky ego, faith to misuse

Comments about Blindness by Aftab Alam

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (11/14/2013 8:37:00 AM)

    , , , a nic message you left, , , enjoyed reading it, , , (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Ozark Mountain Homegrown (9/5/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    Letting ego dominate ones life, leads to a life of emptiness in all aspects... Great poem and message, Aftab.. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,440 Points Sallam Yassin (8/18/2013 11:49:00 AM)

    yes faith is a correction of others
    through your correction of your own falsehood and inner illusions
    not through the hollowness words of your ego/short but shape (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/18/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem with a great message. Its easy to tell nothing to loose, but there is...
    Fantastic write. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 18, 2013

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