Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,699 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Broken And Proud - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

I'm standing
on the outside
looking down

People running round
trying to find their ground

But all they find
Is a government pound
Trying to make them
one of the crowd
Until they retire

Broken And Proud


Comments about Broken And Proud by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 11 Points Christine Blaydes (2/16/2012 12:06:00 PM)

    The truth is always the key in poetry=) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (12/19/2011 12:44:00 AM)

    Ooh! So amazing, truely wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Christine Blaydes (12/14/2011 1:03:00 PM)

    Love it! never thought of it put like that before, and it has opened my eyes wider than they've ever been. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jane Quijano (11/25/2011 10:47:00 PM)

    I like this poem. What an insight to the mediocrity of living...life is something more...and your poem makes us aware and feel it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 65 Points Crimson Love (11/20/2011 2:09:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful poem, incredible write. Nice work, this poem flowed well. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sajna Kailas (11/16/2011 2:28:00 AM)

    nicely written..... true words and theme.your work is amazing.keep it up! ! ! God Bless You! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,244 Points Unwritten Soul (11/14/2011 9:47:00 AM)

    You say when you need, you never tell except it have to share..there's no other way better than dissolve the real things in writing..as your writing is for us..feeding us with thinking...and Dave, you got nice pen with unlimited ink.. :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -2 Points Ibnu Din Assingkiri (11/14/2011 5:58:00 AM)

    sharp and deep. well written. love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 396 Points Cat Hodgson (11/13/2011 10:43:00 PM)

    so true and well written, Cat (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 66 Points Craig Anderson (11/13/2011 5:36:00 PM)

    Powerful and poignant dave. Good write.
    Regards
    Craig (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Cockrell (11/13/2011 4:41:00 PM)

    right there with you! strong, defiant poetry! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 13, 2011



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