Fay Slimm

Rookie - 86 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Coming Home. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Home is within the Self.
All voyage brings us there.
To be aware of welcome
We would have been sharing
Our love. Now departing
From distant shores we find
New ways toward the start
For home. Loth to leave behind
Adventure, yet singing
Of eternity, we find
Balance which joy in Self brings.
Homecoming then feels fine.

Comments about Coming Home. by Fay Slimm

  • (8/8/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    nice cognitive metaphor:
    ''Home is within the Self.''
    wonderful psychoanalytic poem....10++++
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  • (8/8/2009 10:46:00 AM)

    The Sun, the moon, the stars, the sand and the sea, brought me to where, I belong.........home. (Report) Reply

  • (8/5/2009 4:44:00 PM)

    I liked the crispness of this one fay - 10 (Report) Reply

  • (8/5/2009 3:03:00 AM)

    Peace can be found in these words you have expressed in this write. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

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  • (8/4/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    a nice poem...home sweet home nothing can compare...its always a wondeful feeling in coming home...10 (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (8/4/2009 6:41:00 AM)

    Wordswoth says,
    'But trailing clouds of glory do we come,
    From God, who is our home.'
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/3/2009 12:01:00 PM)

    Home is within the Self.
    All voyage brings us there.
    To be aware of welcome
    home is always home and this is beautiful imagination from poet.....10

    rad mine a place called....home bound and anywhere
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  • (7/29/2009 12:43:00 PM)

    home is home
    wherever one goes
    he longs to go back home
    in reality and in death
    lovely poem dear Fay
    a tenner for you
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  • (7/28/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    Home is where your heart is, where little nick knacks dwell
    familiar things, a picture brings, mementoes cupboards swell
    its lovely to go on holiday, but towards the end
    you cannot wait to be back home, cos your home is like a friend
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  • (7/28/2009 7:40:00 AM)

    Wherever we travel throughout the world one place remains special in our hearts and that is home. A very beautiful poem Fay. Best wishes, Andrew (Report) Reply

  • (7/28/2009 4:12:00 AM)

    There is no place like home indeed! ! ! ! !
    you know Fay.. my mom always say.. i waste too much time at internet and playing video games.. she doesn't understand.. it i mean.....
    home is beautiful indeed... i mean lot better than complicated university life....

    with lots of love
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  • (7/27/2009 2:26:00 PM)

    No place like home eh...a warm poem Fay...10+
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  • (7/27/2009 2:09:00 PM)

    Very beautiful poem... After trip - the house - paradise..10.. / Thank you, Fay/
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  • (7/27/2009 1:40:00 PM)

    Homecoming feels great always! ! ! lovely written poem my friend...10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 27, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011

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