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Anjali Sinha
(12/30/2008 8:09:00 PM) |
I love your poetry because its unique
its original---not someone elses'
reflections.
Yeah like Robert, I too will say I like those
phrases 'the body scorches' and 'the sky was
parted from the sea'. It reminded me of the biblical
story of the Red Sea.
great write A++and many 10sssssss
it goes to my fav list
love anjali
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Robert Howard
(12/30/2008 2:31:00 AM) |
This is one of my favorites. I like the variable line lengths that seem to underscore the somewhat random nature of the persona's good fortune. Through it all the rhythms moves confidently. You have crafted some very strong images. 'the body scorches' and ''The sky was parted from the sea
The stars no longer a reflection in a basin' strike me as very successful and powerful.
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JOE POEWHIT
(12/18/2008 10:02:00 AM) |
Glad your happy in a sad world
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