Treasure Island

Fay Slimm

(Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Cyberlove Who?


Hurray for Cybermates
She's made one or two,
There's Tom. Bob and Andrew.
Then there was You.

And every so often
She contacts a few,
Like Linda and Kathleen,
Ernestine too,
Kevin and Dave,
But always there's You.

Without all her line-mates
Oh, what would she do?
She'd miss Tony and Chris,
Michael and Ron,
Sandra and Sue,
Vincent and John,
But there is one
She would really miss.
Ooooh - - - Who?

Submitted: Sunday, October 26, 2008
Edited: Sunday, October 26, 2008

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Cyberlove Who? by Fay Slimm )

Enter the verification code :

  • Carl Harris (11/4/2008 10:36:00 AM)

    It was a pleasure to read this delightful and cleverly written poem, Fay, reflecting quite accurately and humorously, what many of us have experienced in finding cyberfriends on the various poetic and other internet sites. I particularly liked your terse lines in this enchanting poem! Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Kris Smith (11/1/2008 2:40:00 PM)

    Ageless you are, a bright burning star, a tease you will always be but always a comfort to me. Smiling with you all the way through Cyberspace, Chris 10 x (Report) Reply

  • Kevin Wells (10/29/2008 2:53:00 PM)

    Original idea, upbeat and amusing. And so true. It's so nice to know thre are like-minded people out there - friendly natives - in an often insane world (Report) Reply

  • Tia Maria (10/29/2008 5:29:00 AM)

    ; -) Hiya Fay - I just discovered this... hahaha... of course I can very much relate.
    Best wishes, T (Report) Reply

Read all 7 comments »

Top Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
    Maya Angelou
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. Invictus
    William Ernest Henley

PoemHunter.com Updates

New Poems

  1. Cutting Edges Plaguing, Terence G. Craddock
  2. Curse, MAD DEW
  3. Nature's Glory, Tirupathi Chandrupatla
  4. A SECRET, MOHAMMAD SKATI
  5. Life Image Distortions, Terence G. Craddock
  6. From Chibok With Love, Adeosun Olamide
  7. Happy Teacher's Day,2014, India, Dr John Celes
  8. Established To Accept, Lawrence S. Pertillar
  9. I Feel So Stupid, Lawrence S. Pertillar
  10. Thatch and Kilimanjaro, lee fones

Poem of the Day

poet Henry Lawson


The old year went, and the new returned, in the withering weeks of drought,
The cheque was spent that the shearer earned,
and the sheds were all cut out;
...... Read complete »

   

Member Poem

[Hata Bildir]