Darkness Dream Poem by Eric Cockrell

Darkness Dream

Rating: 3.5


i dreamed...
i was lost in the night,
making my way through the trees.
small branches lashed against my face,
i could feel stone beneath my feet.
and somewhere near, but far, the sound of water.

wrapped in the stillness of night,
that has its own sounds,
its own smells.
haunted by something i couldnt define,
almost the feeling of being stalked.

i finally made my way to a moonlit clearing.
a flock of small birds rose in front of me.
in the field were children,
different colors, different languages,
all different ages...
children, playing together.

i looked closer...
and noticed their eyes...
something wrong, something odd.
a steel hard voice spoke in my ear...
'these children have never seen daylight,
and never will...'

i awakened with a start.
one word on my lips...
CHOICES!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 19 February 2012

It's new a dawn of poetry..... It's a good theme! ! ! ! really a fine work! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 19 February 2012

It's new a dawn of poetry..... It's a good theme! ! ! ! really a fine work! ! !

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Dave Walker 19 February 2012

A great poem, very very haunting, a great write.

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Patti Masterman 19 February 2012

If this was a real dream, it must have been chilling. I've heard there are blind creatures that live deep beneath the oceans. But humans were made to see and learn from everything around them. Great job.

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