Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,023 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Daughters! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Daughters are the beloved of parents
They are the proud of the parents.
With their splendid heart they win everyone.
This relationship is woven so beautifully in their heart.
When they get married and settle elsewhere,
Though this thread is invisible in grooms home,
Just take a deep dive into the daughters heart
You will find deep hidden love always for their parents.



Betiyaan! (Hindi)

Babul Ki pyaari hoothi hain betiyaan
Babul ki raunak hoti hain betiyaan
Maaykay ki garv hoti hain betiyaan
Her ek ko apne dil say jeet lethi hain betiyaan.
Dil say Banda hua hotha hai dor unka babul say
Woh dor Sasural mein dikhayee nahin detha hai
Agar dil ki gehrayee mein jhankhogey toh
rishta gehrayee ka dikhayee detha hai.



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Geetha Jayakumar.


Comments about Daughters! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 30,130 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/8/2014 6:54:00 AM)

    Both the poems are beautiful. Very impressive. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 16,670 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (9/17/2014 12:52:00 PM)

    so true it is......Geetha......daughters have emotions and sentiments and they are really very supportive, kind
    and hospitable to their parents through good and bad phase of life (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,127 Points Kee Thampi (12/21/2013 11:04:00 PM)

    our old age-
    daughters always love their- own- parents
    they only treat us in old age.....
    give our heartful for them (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,127 Points Kee Thampi (12/21/2013 11:01:00 PM)

    our old age-
    daughters always love their- own- parents
    they only treat us in old age.....
    give our heartful for them (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,081 Points Rohit Sapra (12/12/2013 10:23:00 AM)

    This is really a wonderful poem. A girl child is a blessing to this world. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (12/9/2013 1:52:00 PM)

    that's the educated thought...rishta gehrayee ka dikhayee detha hai....good versions both! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 300 Points Dee Corpolongo (12/8/2013 3:25:00 PM)

    A deeply felt and oh so true poem....Daughters capture our hearts forever.
    Excellent poem stating such! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (12/8/2013 1:25:00 PM)

    A BEAUTIFUL POEM good translations (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    Daughters are the beloved of parents, , nice an fact....10

    daughters
    not sought after
    yet give shelter
    in old age t | Delete this message (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Suman Kumar Das (12/8/2013 1:12:00 AM)

    So beautifully composed in both version...................a eternal truth............. loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,160 Points Valsa George (12/7/2013 11:52:00 PM)

    So true, Geetha! I miss a daughter's love! Hope my would be daughters in law will once fill that gap! (I have two sons only) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 994 Points Mallika Achuthan Menon (12/7/2013 1:33:00 PM)

    Very nice poem...I liked your style of writing so much. If you don't
    mind please go through my new poems.I am waiting for your comments.

    Regards,
    Mallika. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,833 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/7/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    Nice poem in both versions. Daughters are darlings for their parents. Lovely poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,843 Points Kavya . (12/7/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    Well said n hw true.... hindi version i liked more...daughters r precious jewels of parents who always bestow their love upon them (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 1, 2014


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