Vijay Sai

Rookie - 465 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Divine Showers - Poem by Vijay Sai

Another day
Another disappointment
Haplessly dethroned
Helplessly ignored
Teased and tormented
Not a point to prove
I accepted the cause
For no fault of mine
And moved on
Reminding myself repeatedly
This moment is never permanent in life
Shattered and tarnished
I tread along the wayside
Yelling aloud! Is there anyone who could hear me?
Twin eyes soon drenched in swimming pool
Just then, little droplets
Pouring into divine showers
Wiped away all my tears
I thanked my heavenly friend
Feeling fresh and rejuvenated
I got up
Saying to myself
There’s always another chance!
To prove
The hunter too can become the hunted!


Comments about Divine Showers by Vijay Sai

  • (1/12/2013 10:18:00 AM)


    its a lovely poem it gives hope to the hopeless (Report) Reply

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  • Queeny Gona (12/15/2012 6:14:00 AM)


    Desperate quest for success is finally met and it is the beauty of this write! (Report) Reply

  • Goddy Nana-mens (8/11/2012 6:30:00 AM)


    Great poem, Vijai. I love the ending. very inspiring (Report) Reply

  • (5/23/2010 9:36:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem. When we keep our eyes wide open (probably brain) , opportunities are unlimited. It's like stars in sky, we have to scale, just, the Terrace to view. Wait for the cloud to remove veil, all disappointments will vanish. I write this, that all our expressions reflect our true inner feelings. I write every expressions literally. I take every expressions literally. Nice expressions. (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2010 8:29:00 AM)


    Your poetry is wonderfully full and alive, you give strong and intense feelings and emotions, your visual wording is well done. This is a wonderful poem, very intense.

    thanks for sharing
    Michael
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  • (3/4/2010 11:47:00 AM)


    Another wonderful piece to add to your collection.
    My favorite line...
    This moment is never permanent in life.

    Thank You
    Izzey Strange
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  • Balvant Barot (11/25/2009 9:04:00 PM)


    I heard you! Very well said! Awaiting for another Devine shower! (Report) Reply

  • (10/12/2009 12:14:00 PM)


    Fantastic.Torments, tortures are part of our life but God is always kind to gift something, to take it in our stride, in order to get over the moment of agony--be it optimism, be it a new friend or whatever.Very well written. (Report) Reply

  • (10/9/2009 9:09:00 AM)


    interesting poem, nice symbolistic expressions, thank you for sharing.......... (Report) Reply

  • (10/7/2009 1:04:00 AM)


    Words usage is elegant! ! ! But the ending stanzacould have been made more clear..10 + for your poetic aptitude! ! (Report) Reply

  • Breanni Sharon Mcduffey (10/6/2009 8:16:00 PM)


    This poem was just brillant i loved it, it was wonderful keep up the good work :) (Report) Reply

  • (10/6/2009 2:55:00 PM)


    there is no life without hope and there is no hope without life...
    ups and downs that's life... when you're in a tunnel surely you will glance a ray this is the HOPE, he asks for you to run and run and run until you reach the SUN...

    your DIVINE SHOWERS is well expressed!
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  • (10/5/2009 6:45:00 AM)


    I got up saying to myself there's always another chance......So True n so inspirational....Wonderful poetic diction.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (10/4/2009 3:57:00 PM)


    This is refreshing poetic rain that emerges out of the dark cloud of torment. I really like this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rajkumar Mukherjee (10/4/2009 10:01:00 AM)


    Dear Vijay,
    Thanks for your invite. It's a good poem. The message is loud and clear.Choice of words and rhythm is perfectly maintained.I feel two changes will make the flow of your poem better, this is just a suggestion, choice is yours,
    In L-14-'-Is there anyone who could hear' may be changed to-'Is there anybody there? '
    In L-19-'I thanked my heavenly friend' to 'I thanked Heaven'
    I liked the poem. rated at 9. keep on writing
    Rajkumar
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  • Ravi Sathasivam (10/4/2009 7:15:00 AM)


    Good poem
    Good composition.
    Divine showers here
    Enjoyed reading it
    Thanks for sharing with me
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  • (10/4/2009 2:33:00 AM)


    i like the way the words flow, well done dear, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (10/3/2009 11:53:00 PM)


    Good composition but if I am not mistaken the rain hides my tears but not my fears okay anyway good poem. Nice meter. (Report) Reply

  • (10/3/2009 2:07:00 PM)


    I liked it...nice poem...nicely composed... (Report) Reply

  • (10/3/2009 9:38:00 AM)


    Divine showers nice poem.10 out of 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, October 2, 2009


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