Vijay Sai

Rookie - 36 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Flame of the forest Poem by Vijay Sai


Misty clouds
Sneaking through
Mystery mountains
Faint drizzles
Threatening heavy downpours
Singing birds
Marching in rhythmic flocks
Thick vegetation densely populated
Beetle bugs breaking eerie silence
Monkeys jumping tree to tree
Massive rocks standing tall
Water fall so ferocious
All these in between
Blooming in reddish orange
Flame of the forest
As beautiful as ever
A feast to eyes!

Submitted: Wednesday, June 19, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 22, 2014

Topic of this poem: nature


Do you like this poem?
1 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Form:


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Dear readers, please browse for Flame of the forest tree(Delonix regia) in google search

Comments about this poem (Flame of the forest by Vijay Sai )

  • Rookie - 183 Points John Rickell (3/26/2014 6:06:00 PM)

    I like this evocative poem thankyou John (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,923 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/11/2014 7:58:00 PM)

    Totally love misty clouds coming down upon the mountains, it does make them seem mysterious.
    Great imagery, Vijay! Can picture the flame of the forest in my mind along with the monkeys
    jumping from tree to tree, massive rocks and beetles. Love this poem! RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sixtus Osim (11/24/2013 4:56:00 PM)

    Good imagery. Nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Thabang Kgwatalala (11/3/2013 10:29:00 AM)

    I enjoyed reading you poem......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Onku .ghosh. (9/6/2013 11:40:00 AM)

    Very well written.THe poem begins very well and the forest is described so vividly.A very good write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/31/2013 2:03:00 PM)

    Very cool. The forest and its trees those have stories to say! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 550 Points Dimitri Jagodinski (8/23/2013 5:22:00 AM)

    Nice visual poem. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Richard York (8/22/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    Like it very much. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 160 Points Meena Mustafa (8/21/2013 3:44:00 PM)

    Lovely! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/21/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    Wow.. Wonderful poem. Its really a flame of forest. Loved reading it. Plus 10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,158 Points Tiku . (8/21/2013 6:26:00 AM)

    Very nice picture of nature.Beautiful drop.Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (8/21/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    i do love forests! ! ! ... i like to visit India cause i've heard of its forests... good for u...i live in the north of Iran...here we have a lot of sphagnous forests... ur poem reminded me of walking in forests...i did enjoy...very nice poem.thanx for inviting :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,652 Points Dave Walker (8/21/2013 5:49:00 AM)

    A great poem, wonderfully written. I will do a Google search. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Gaius Gbeti Kafui (8/21/2013 5:04:00 AM)

    it wonderful how nature is.i love this piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Macanthony Chijioke Nwatu (8/7/2013 7:26:00 PM)

    Nice one sir. Well penned with personification and rhythm. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Louis Cecile (8/7/2013 6:04:00 AM)

    A well paced rhythm that mimics the flow of the flames of the forest. The impact on the scene is well handled and could even be expanded further. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kensley Charlemagne (7/23/2013 3:39:00 AM)

    Love the vivid imagery in this piece. I like the meter of your first three lines which conjures a stealthy, creeping, slow, cautious movement. The next two lines build up the suspense for me and really ties nicely to create a unity of theme in the first five lines, from mist to drizzle to threatening downpour, denoting worsening conditions. That is in direct contrast to the last five lines denoting a thing of joy and wonderment. The middle seven lines is where it got a little confusing for me. From threating downpours to singing birds is quite a contrast, a shock even. 'Water falls so ferocious' I am not sure if I should value that as good or bad with all the contrast going on in the middle with the monkeys jumping from tree to tree; but I guess the rain does eventually fall unable to out the flame of the forest or what we call the flambouyant in the tropics :) . Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ankur Thakur (7/20/2013 8:20:00 AM)

    Very appreciable sir...

    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Neetha Sasidharan (7/19/2013 6:20:00 AM)

    the reader could actually see wats said in d poem....cool...kp goin' (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,200 Points Walterrean Salley (7/18/2013 6:47:00 AM)

    ...A feast to the eyes. And a song to the ears as well. For this, your beautiful verse, warms the heart. Thanks! (Report) Reply

Read all 55 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  3. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  4. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  5. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  6. If, Rudyard Kipling
  7. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  8. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  9. Alone, Edgar Allan Poe
  10. Caged Bird, Maya Angelou
[Hata Bildir]