Treasure Island

Dwi utami

(11-11-1986 / Ngawi.jawa timur)

***DOWNPOUR***


Felt cold of my skin*
The downpour descend very Quick*
I'saw the sky fully of darkness*
I'look at the dark everything around me*
The downpour make me feelings of silent*

Imagine all about of my sweetheart*
I'feeling needs a warm embrace and enjoyed together the panorama of the downpour*

So cold for my heart feeling all alone*
I'need all of from my sweetheart.
I'need see the rainbow deep eyes of my sweetheart*
I'feeling of deeply my yearn heart*
I'need touch the smooth sky from your hands*

Show me the warm light from your heart*
The downpour descend very Quick*
Cold and painful of my face*
Cold and painful of my lips*
Cold and painful of my arms*
Needs a little warmth*

Submitted: Tuesday, July 27, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, July 27, 2010

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (8/3/2010 3:57:00 PM)

    Rainy tawny Poem…symbolizing with fiancée…blooming …dancing…billowing… feet- tapping…emotion…all in one…romance-aureate [Elaborately ornamented] …wow! So much romance…just a minuscule for me pliss for poetry...lolouuud… thanks for sharing
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • Terence George Craddock (7/30/2010 12:11:00 PM)

    as an elemental, i love the rain, if i walk in it alone. the downpour descends and releases receptive feelings of appreciation. you are alone in the downpour of your love, alone until the moments of his return. (Report) Reply

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