Unwritten Soul


Mystery voice whispering sound
Sound of silence, echoes the emptiness
Haunting in chamber of the darkness
Within a sanctuary of nothingness
Embraced, in a giant continent

Hushing the bright,
Parfum de paradise sprayed
Emancipate dusts to be in celestial arm
Touched in calm, with love, He made warm
Pure affection stirred into gravitational attraction
So that the love light can bind, gracing the space
After blowing dearly soul to the center of heart
New born arrived, radiated to the core bright
Wonder if the angels were busy that night
Delivering you a life, new born star to rise

In a far distance,
Reflecting serenade in our eyes
All candles in the sky, diamonds of the night
Letting the heartbeats twinkle, blinking the light
Inspired every single eye to brighten their hearts
As a single shine shimmering the beauty of dark

If other sparks enthrall your sight
My dear estrella, my star of the night
Dont say the light not by your side
Never a star gazing its own light
Truly my eyes witness your starlight

Lanterns of millions for you holding around
Orion smiles could be the brightest one
But dont shy little star, dear estrellita
Can be small, different color of shine
Lovely as you, forever irreplaceable yours
So stay twinkling muse, blinking on us,

Twinkling light, O my Dazzling star,
With other charming shines around you
This sweet night, let moon be our shepherd
Bright in our hands, share loves in the dark,
Surrounding the moon, Ringing with the clouds
Lets paint the glittering light to reach each other hearts
Drawing constellations where we will see our life be bolder
And we shall break the long silence echoes in this chamber
Looking the masterpiece painting, on the sky, calm all travelers
True direction, north to south guidance that never astray forever
O the beauty in each of you, such incomparable my dear star
As you were born with love in the place you are supposed to
If we losing one of the clues, will change the meaning of view

Beauty and night perfection
Never gone, by the rise of morning light
Awaking sun not denying our love for night
This red star only to fulfill the mission given
To remind life born in different unique light vision
As you not an ordinary star, my dear companion

Has reach for us time we born and beauty
Dont you only envy the others shine only
Denying the sparks you have within
Pretending as if we are not exist
Will only fading light in this continent
Where nothingness hiding in the darkness
Allow the sound of emptiness haunting us

So shine my dear estrella, my shining star
Forever shine us with love in our eyes

*(Estrella=star in spanish, Estrellita=lil star)

Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2012
Edited: Saturday, August 25, 2012

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

The new born star is you since the first time you have your own breathe. If star was given light, we are given our mind with diverse abilities...Dedicate for you, and trust yourself that you are the star! keep bright as you are, our light maybe Dim, tiny, bright, small, big, but the reasons of this diverse shape and brightness behind our mind, but if we ponder the creation of life and space we will understand...God makes no mistakes to let you born in this world. Someday, we may fall we may down, Still falling star time to make the wishes hahahah so please just Just reveal your shine till the end of our time, and hope the artwork i painted there also help u understand this simple poem deeper_Unwritten Soul

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  • Veteran Poet - 4,443 Points * Sunprincess * (1/23/2014 6:49:00 PM)

    ......this is a special tribute to the stars of the universe...and I now have a new word in my vocabulary estrella...it is a beautiful word...you know before I searched the definition..i think it was a tribute for your special friend or family member...somehow I thought estrella was someone's name...you penned a beautiful poem and definitely put a big smile on my face...I enjoyed it much... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Rekha Mandagere (9/12/2012 1:07:00 AM)

    God has no distinction and has created all beautiful beings. Each one is distinct and can contribute their might to the universe by enjoying the status of Estrella. Soul, you have given all of us a nice status in the universe. It reflects immense love for humanity. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 248 Points Captain Cur (9/7/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    You have given the word Estrella (star) new meaning and light. I rely on your poems in times of trail and sorrow. This poem is a poem of love, friendship, loyalty and strength. These are your qualities my dear friend and you share them openly and lovingly with all. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Knight Fizzstorm (8/29/2012 12:10:00 PM)

    A poem of learning and meaning to be studied and cherished.
    Lines of knowledge mixed with imaginations calling and human beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (8/28/2012 3:45:00 PM)

    No use in using words that are limiting, soul you know the unbound love i have within, for you, for all dear poets. A true gift of great beauty. Forever shall we be a part of each other (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Wabi Sabi (8/28/2012 2:12:00 AM)

    Estella has been shipping around to complete what we are. There is nothing we can do about it because we have been born by design. I swim in my fate river like choosing what I want from my destiny, however, it must be by design. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Vipins Puthooran (8/27/2012 6:45:00 PM)

    So shine my dear estrella, my shining star
    Forever shine us with love in our eyes
    we're all shining stars in our astral world...
    'Tis such a beautifulm poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Siyabonga a Nxumalo (8/26/2012 5:22:00 AM)

    I am proud to call you a friend, the miles and oceans between us means nothing my brother, God knew we will meet somehow...thanks a lot for the paintings, I treasure them and now the poem completes the puzzle, you are a star Soul, my Soul will always know that she shares a name with one of the brightest stars, so she must also shine even brighter....the poem is a masterpiece, no word can describe it completely...this really shows we are a family here on PH...but I wanted to be the first o person to coment on this poem, but PH refused me that chance as they didn't post my comments...

    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,860 Points Neela Nath (8/25/2012 10:17:00 AM)

    I'm watching the StarEstrella in my mind's sky.Yes, we may not be the sun, but, can be as mild as star's light.B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l.Soul---Nil___ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Ellias Aghili (8/25/2012 1:21:00 AM)

    Stars are the key to find every lightly things in our way to the end, they are every where....nice poem with great meaning, so lovely....well done my friend
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