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Eternal Love

Childhood is my old home with you
Here, in heart is where you build it
for your love stay last you said
I know it maybe few years
But this sweet memories
Always keep me safe,
shelter my soul again
Protect me from pain
Yes time may flies
No i wont forget
For love you are
This is home
i will ever stay
In anywhere i am
With you, in my heart

O those Innocent days
Missed and now
gone behind
and leave me
alone without you
my dear mom
my dear love
once
and all times

Tears wont cry
water wont flow
Still i do cry
Breeze wipe cold
Times freeze my soul
For a while i stare upon past
returned to your shadows
Silence is a way we talk here
To bring good old smiles
With color resurfacing eyes
Memories recalled
Whispered to me
Like i hearing you
Again and again
A calling voice
A voice
of Yours
sweet
but time has come
and we have to say goodbye
I always try but i never believe it
They may say i lied but to me you not die
But just only unseen by eyes
because in heart
still have you
with me
our perfect home
My sole heart

Submitted: Sunday, December 16, 2012
Edited: Monday, December 17, 2012


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Dedicate this writing to my friend, Sunprincess and her late mother.As her mom gone last year on Dec14, And Also dedicate this poem to Kee Thamphi who always live his life with her late mother...This poem dedicate to two of my good friends here...Dears, May God protect us from sorrows and let love eternal...Yes Love is eternal in our home, our hearts. Dear sunprincess my friend, dont cry just believe that your mom is always living in your heart so keep happy so she will feel the same inside and above_Unwritten Soul

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  • * Sunprincess * (1/28/2014 4:40:00 PM)

    .......this is one beautiful write soul and it is very special to me....
    still I miss her and think of her everyday...thanks for
    writing this dedication for me and your friend kee...

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  • Dee Corpolongo (9/30/2013 2:15:00 AM)

    With the tears in my eyes, which is truly no surprise, , , , my thoughts turn to my MOM, whom I miss all the time...
    Beautiful poem made for a friend~ with your loving words that you send...being the beautiful SOUL that you are..
    with a heart so beautiful to possess.

  • Geetha Jayakumar (9/8/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    Touching poem Soul...Really Mothers love is eternal..Loved reading each lines..
    Fantastic write...

  • Farah Ilyas (6/3/2013 6:25:00 AM)

    Touching poem with the message to have soft heart+corner for others, May her mother in rest & peace forever (aamin) ....your support & favor must work wonders for these suffering beings hopefully, always be happy you indeed have a fertile soul planted by love of nature..well done

  • Frank James Davis (4/5/2013 3:31:00 PM)

    You have a warm, profound sensitivity to fellow human beings; the impact of your tender and perceptive poetry certainly reflects that.
    Eternal Love is gratifying to read!

  • Spiritual Seeker (2/1/2013 8:12:00 PM)

    Your heart touches others....living! Great piece.

  • Wahab Abdul (1/10/2013 9:54:00 AM)

    lovely poem, i enjoyed it fully...

  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (12/30/2012 11:12:00 AM)

    Heart warming poem Soul, I can also relate to it. Its people like you that really gives us courage in trying times coz we know that they care...thanks a million times, and to my sisters Kee and Sunprincess, it was meant to be..and like Soul said, they are not dead coz they live with us daily, we always feel their spirits...
    Siya_! !

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/26/2012 3:41:00 PM)

    mother's love is eternal! ! ! ! 'tis a great poem dear soul! ! !

  • Hans Vr (12/22/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    This is such a lovely poem. You are right, my friend the love of the mother lives on in our lives forever. The care I received from my mother, lives on in my heart and I hope it will continue to live on in the hearts of those whom I care for. In that way we eternalise perhaps not the life but at least the love of our mothers. The bitter remembrance of her death, with time, makes place for the many sweet memories she gave to us. IF we can let go of the guilt feeling (all of us did not enough of what our mother liked and perhaps too much of what she didn't like, but if we think about it, truly, a mother forgives her children on the spot without us having to ask forgiveness) , yes if we can let go of the guilt feeling, we will speed up the process a lot to enjoy the sweet remembrance of our mother and leave behind the bitterness. Of course we will miss our mothers forever, but somewhere her love and her spirit is still with us.
    I thought, while reading this poem, wow, Soul is really opening up here, writing these superb and wonderful lines about his mom, but then I read the comments. It is great to try and console friends with such beautiful poetry. If you can write so touchingly and almost perfectly about someone else's mom, I really look forward to the poem about your own

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