Treasure Island

Geovanni Leaño

(August 31,1991 / Zamboanga City)

marquee3 ILOVEYOU! 3 /marquee


Here's a <3 for BLUE

........................ ................................................. ..............
................UOYEVO......... .OVEYOU............................
.......... ...! ....................L...L...................! .......................
...........I.......... ................I..........................I..... ..................
..........L................ ....................................L............ .........
...........O...................BLUE. ..................O......................
.... .........V....................................... .....V.........................
.............. ...E......................................E...... .....................
.......................Y ............................Y.................... ............
...........................O..... ...............O................................. ..
................................U.......... U.........by: .........................
............. ..........................! ...................Lex_Potent.......


I know for you my dear it's enough...
But I still don't know when it'll end...
probabbly never... I love you!
you know it's true...

This art I made isn't just enough...
to show you how much i love you...
The heart isn't the point...
But what's in the inside...

-GanNi

Submitted: Thursday, April 17, 2008
Edited: Thursday, April 17, 2008

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  • Troy Clark (4/21/2008 1:49:00 PM)

    I don't know much about love, or love poetry, but this is a really kewl poem! (Report) Reply

  • Emancipation Planz (4/18/2008 1:15:00 AM)

    Changed my mind... just this once... ok.... wonderful! ! ! ! ! To be so young and techno-friendly creative.... any chance you can send me a moving SIGH! ! ! ... (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (4/17/2008 11:21:00 PM)

    Loving someone who stops loving you makes us BLUE (sad) , much is that person have loved another! Good poem. Check JUDAS KISS. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Butters (4/17/2008 5:22:00 PM)

    Sheesh, you can't get much more creative than this. Will Blue turn red I ask myself. Good stuff. Paul. (Report) Reply

  • Dorothy- A. Holmes (4/17/2008 4:56:00 PM)

    Geovanni,

    I salute how brave you are to express your love so freely...'Poetry is not knowing, but feeling; although there may be wisdom in the poem, it must be felt, not merely understood...' this quote was said by Paul Engle at a conference on teaching creative writing given at Library of Congress in 1973...I live by this when I write. He also said...'The power of poetry is to make art out of plain and brutal words.'
    Remember...The Language of poetry is precise, concise, charged with feeling.
    I realize you did not ask for a lecture but wanted to share with you some thoughts of wisdom once passed on to me.
    Dorothy (Report) Reply

  • Sam Hughff (4/17/2008 2:09:00 PM)

    It's always nice to read something passionate, especially when its in the shape of a heart. Well done (Report) Reply

  • Yuri Duraan (4/17/2008 2:09:00 PM)

    a wonderful new way of poetry! ! ! I agree with the sentiment, , , , maybe you can read my poem 'ribbon' - it somehow reminds me of that... well done! Yuri* (Report) Reply

  • Abha Sharma (4/17/2008 11:59:00 AM)

    so love can make you do anything and here it has made you unique..exactly an eye catcher...good one..hope it makes you do more creativity..for us to enjoy.. (Report) Reply

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