In the midst
of an everlasting journey
with no arrival in sight
a fountain of youth
is draining away
Don't waste your life
don't throw it all away
live it to the full
but with a future in your mind
Thats it. Shortly, but very strong. ...a fountain of youth is draining away...
Very well said, Fountain of youth is draining away...thoughtful poem especially for youngsters..Loved reading it.
Live life to the full. Use it well. Beautiful message through nicely crafted lines. Thank you.
Bright and enduring words of hope, it's what we all need. Thanks Dave, good one!
Captivating language with a prosaic flow. An excellent picture is painted in the first stanza, then expounded upon and made meaningful in the second stanza. It's actually pretty amazing what you've accomplished with so few words! Thanks for sharing.
Youth is blossom until autumn comes/ really a good poem! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a good message in this poem. nicely written